Script

The script was created by the director with help from the other group members. It will be used by the actor/actresses to help guide them to perform in the correct way, as well as being instructed by the director. It is important to put as much detail in as possible so they have enough guidance to help them interpret the script correctly.

Draft

We decided that our first attempt needed improving, as the ending seemed too brief, so we decided to develope the ending so that the exchange between Jackson and Alyssa would last longer and so it would be clearer to the audience; as they would  have more dialogue and more time to take it in. We also found that the speech needed to stand out some more to make it easier to read when filming, so we moved the speech towards the centre of the page.

Final Draft